5. Dreams

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Hi there! I'm here to bring you this critique as a part of 's event

First off, I'd just like to say that I am in no way a pro in crafts (though I do paint), so I don't really get how hard it might be to paint on such a difficult surface >"< Despite that though, I think you've definitely done a great job with this jar. The variety of colours is extremely eye-catching and once someone clicks into this piece, they will most certainly then click to enlarge it in order to see the details and figure out (some, not all, cuz it was too hard for me >"<) what the quotes were on the jar!

Some suggestions on how to improve this piece (just so that it's all 5 stars XD):

¤ 1) Connecting the piece to the theme: Although it's very eye-catching and all, it's hard for people to understand what exactly you're writing about until they read the description and click the link to the quotes. You could probably connect it with the lid (that isn't in the picture...ur working on it atm?), perhaps writing the word "Dream" or anything else on top and on the side that might help link the art and theme together

¤ 2) Lines: I know it must've been very hard to draw straight lines on such an odd "canvas" but perhaps you could've use a tape or some other kind of guideline to help you when you drew the black lines of the colours. It's not TOO too distracting except for in the middle picture for the short horizontal dark blue and long vertical deep red stroke.

All in all, a magnificent, meaningful, and definitely unique piece of work! I would definitely use this jar if I saw it XD Great job and keep up such wonderful creativity

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